I’ve been down for weeks, and nothing on Literotica has touched me. But you have. A most lovely tale, well-wrought, complex and credible, with real living characters. My favourites list is not well-populated: I’m a very pernickety reader. But this is being added to it. Thank you.
I loved it! Thomas was perfect!
What a story! The romantic and sexual build up was paced extraordinarily well; the sensuality and sex was delivered with incredible heat; and, perhaps most importantly, it’s an honest and truthful story of two people meeting and joining together, getting their human needs of passion and lovingness satisfied by the other. An incredible story! An incredibly satisfying story!
“Outstanding”…Keep up the exceptional writing…..Love it!!!
Wonderfully imaginative and creatively written. You got many fans on here, harding – I’m one of them….Keep up the good work and don’t keep us waiting too long before the next instalment!!!!
I love all your stories Harding and this novella really allows you to show your incredible talent with character development. I too have added you to my favorite author list. I can’t wait to move onto the next couple of Ali’s Art chapters. Gripping, hot, realistic and wonderful. Thanks.
Harding, your writing is marvelous. Incredible dialogue and character development. Probably the best writing on the site
This gets better with each chapter! I’m gonna blow a gasket at the next one…
The hallmark of your entire series has been not only the wonderful pacing and attention to detail, but the realism of the dialogue and emotions of the characters.
Damn you! Now I have to wait another day, and probably another. You rascal!
You have an unbelievable writing talent that lets me feel the emotion, the ever closer sway of these two toward the inevitable. Thank you for sharing this story.
Great Writing, could not stop reading it once started.
Thanks so much for such a lovely and very hot series. I’ve enjoyed every moment leading up to the conclusion. All your characters have depth and the chapters have benefited from that.
Once the first page is read it is impossible to stop reading this story. Great word choices, excellent use of setting and a wonderfully progressive story with great sex to boot. Fantastic job on this work.
An absolutely AMAZING story, well written, and one that cannot be stopped once started.
It’s like the story just reached into my brain and triggered everything I felt or even wished to feel about my first girl.
Oh, damn, I like this beautiful story… their innocence is really beautiful. Awesome job, thank you for sharing this!
Almost seemed wanting more to story… I couldn’t find where though. That made it perfect I guess. Great story and writing.
Excellent, and a beautiful ending. Congratulations on the win.
A beautiful story, so well conceived and so well executed. I’m glad I didn’t read it in its original form, because the way it ends now is just so fitting, so natural. I didn’t plan on finishing the story tonight, but when that menacing shape came down the road I had to keep reading all the way to the end. You are a fine writer, and a fine story-teller in the old tradition of the family elders in the Irish and Scots tradition entertaining the children before sending them scurrying off to jump into bed and pull the bedclothes over their heads so the evil ones couldn’t find them. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
I read a lot of erotic stories, although I’m not sure this should be in an erotic class, but one of it’s own. A novel in the making.
This story shines. A truly lovely tale.
I am sooooooooo wet! Buster, you better be working on chapter 2, or you’re the one that’s getting the spanking!
You are one helluva writer. What an imagination. Loved this heaps.
A most remarkable and beautifully-written story. Not a flaw anywhere. And so fucking, teasingly, hot
Awesome. This was a brilliant read… I want more!!! Thank you author.